- Read the letter from your friend.
- Has the author followed the instructions for a letter (date, how to start and finish the letter)?
- Is the text coherent?
- What about the grammar and the spelling? Has the author used am/are/is correctly....?
- Now you are going to do "Two STARS and a WISH". That means that you are going to write two good things about the text and one thing that could be improved.
STARS
Variation and vocabulary
Your language is varied.
You vary your language well.
Your vocabulary is very varied.
You have a varied language and don’t repeat yourself.
Clarity and coherence
Your text has good flow.
It’s easy to understand your text.
The content of your text was clear with good details.
The content was very clear.
Your text is coherent and clear.
Adaption
You adapt your text to the receiver and situation.
Grammar and spelling are good.
Good sentence structure.
You write with good grammar.
WISHES
Variation and vocabulary
You could vary your vocabulary more.
You could use more difficult words and sentences.
You need to expand your vocabulary.
Clarity and coherence
Your text could have better flow.
Try to make your text more coherent.
You can work with clarifying your text.
Adaption
You can think about adapting your text to the receiver and situation.
You could adapt your language more to the purpose.
Grammar and spelling
You can improve the grammar in your text.
You need to improve the sentence structure.
There are some spelling mistakes, read through your text once more to find them.
Think about what tense you use (verbs).
Variation and vocabulary
Your language is varied.
You vary your language well.
Your vocabulary is very varied.
You have a varied language and don’t repeat yourself.
Clarity and coherence
Your text has good flow.
It’s easy to understand your text.
The content of your text was clear with good details.
The content was very clear.
Your text is coherent and clear.
Adaption
You adapt your text to the receiver and situation.
Grammar and spelling are good.
Good sentence structure.
You write with good grammar.
WISHES
Variation and vocabulary
You could vary your vocabulary more.
You could use more difficult words and sentences.
You need to expand your vocabulary.
Clarity and coherence
Your text could have better flow.
Try to make your text more coherent.
You can work with clarifying your text.
Adaption
You can think about adapting your text to the receiver and situation.
You could adapt your language more to the purpose.
Grammar and spelling
You can improve the grammar in your text.
You need to improve the sentence structure.
There are some spelling mistakes, read through your text once more to find them.
Think about what tense you use (verbs).
(The phrases above are taken from Mia Smith's blog)
Now you are going to do "Two STARS and a WISH". That means that you are going to write to good things about the text and one thing that could be improved.
6. When you have got the feedback from your friend, you correct your text.
7. Hand it in to Maria.
6. When you have got the feedback from your friend, you correct your text.
7. Hand it in to Maria.
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